第一自然段P1:(描述社会现象2-3句)

  • 第一种：传统讲义书籍上的模板
    　　Presently，it often hits the headlines of the newspaper that 句子, which has aroused a heated discussion among the public . Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse? In the long run it might give rise to a host of detrimental/beneficial/advantageous results .
    　　As an inevitable result of ever-accelerating development of science and technology,XXX have gained their growing popularity across China.They have,to some extent, become a heated public concern at present.

　　Learning Chinese around the globe seems/proves/is a prevalent trend,which means that foreigners are eager to have a better understanding
DIY
1.Presently=At present=Nowadays=contemporary
2.newspaper=magazine=journal
3.arouse=awaken=cause=provoke
4.discussion=concern=debate
5.give rise to=lead to =contribute to
6.a host of=a sea of=a train of=numerous

  • 第二种:下定义＋写作句式
    　　XXX is/proves/seems__名词短语___,which means that__句子__.The problem will be bound to generate severe results if we keep turning a blind eye to it.

第二自然段p2:问题、影响（2-3个问题）

框架：At the very beginning,问题一.Additionally,问题二. At last,问题三

问题有那些？词穷这么办？第一种方法：被自己总结的万能语料(范文)

  • 身心健康关键词:

    • 语料1: XXX might tend to pose a threat to people’s physical and psychological health such as increasing the risk of suffering from 症状(比如)
    • 语料2: ____ can not only relieve pressure but also anxiety in our daily routine
    • 语料3: (expand one’s vision/ broaden one’s horizons/widen one’s out look/cultivate one’s taste(temperament)/accumulate one’s competency)

  • 人际关系(Interpersonal) 关键词

    • 语料1:Some private individuals are so immersed in XXX that they fail to make friends in reality.
    • 语料2： The overwhelming XXX has promoted people from talking with their colleagues and friends face to face.
    • The widespread satus quo might bring about the issue of generation gap, which gives rise to dreadful results.
    • xxx might have detrimental effective face -to face communication and interpersonal skills which play vital role in building relationships with other

  • 环境(environment/green commuting)关键词

    • 语料1：XXX will cause sever air pollution and increase greenhouse gas emission，which enables us not to live a low-carbon life.
    • 语料2:XXX might not only waste precious resources but also lay a heavy burden on the environment.

  • 效率（Efficiency）

    • 语料1：XXX could, to some degree ,reduce greatly (Study/work) , which saves lot of that could be used to other things of greater significance
    • 语料2： xxx might make people have a better understanding of other important things encourage them to learn more and lead to high efficiency

  • 经济发展-devolopment of economy(long-term/sustainable/raid and sound/comprehensive)

    • 语料1： There is no denying that XXX will hinder/hamper/slow down the sustainable development of economy

  • 方便:convenience/convenient

    • 语料1:XXX make it possible for people to perform various tasks without leaving office/home.
    • 语料2:待续

  • 节约(浪费)时间、金钱(time-consuming/time-saving/cost-effective/economical)

    • 语料2:For those who + 定从， XXX is an excellent way to free up our precious time.

内外因

  • 外因1:经济发展: ecnomic development/evolution; the advance of technology;people’s living standards
    • 语料1:recent years have witnessed a rapid growth of economy and people’s living standards have improved remarkbly. As a result ,N in growing numbers+v+o
    • 语料2: Due to__ , it is often claimed that our country has entered an unprecedented economic bomm. As a consequence , S+V+O
    • 语料3: Recent years have witnessed rapid growth of the economy and people’s living standard have improved remarkably
  • 外因2：媒体（electronic media = mass media）
    • 参考语料!： It is universally acknowledged that in our society the mass media has failed to raise public awareness and advocate the tendency of 题目.
  • 外因3: 政府媒体(法规/政策/监管) laws and regulations , preferential policy , supervision
    • 参考语料1:Despite the strict laws,the government has greate difficulty in enforcing it in out daily routine.
    • a sea of laws and regulations concerning … might give rise to the expanding trend .
    • The government has failed to develop a detailed plan on ……
  • 内因:个人主体 (awareness/consciousness; skills/ability [creative thinking/innovative thinking/independent ablity/high-score and low competence])

第二自然段p2：第二写法

  • 简单句
    比较级结构: the + 比较级…, the + 比较级…
    例句： residents in growing numbers tend to consume less food , their physical health will become more severe/grave
  • 并列句
    not only… but also…
    例句:Having a slim body shape can not only leave a good first impression for collegues and friends but also give them a competitive edge in hunting for jobs.

复合主从句

  • 主语从句
    It proves self-evident that… ,It seems beyond dispute that…
    , It is widely accepted that … It is universsally acknowledged that…
    eg: It seems beyond dispute that skipping dinner will lower/hinder/hamber our study and work efficiency.

  • 宾语从句
    sb make/consider/deem/find it adj that + 宾语从句
    eg:an increasing numer of dweller might deem/consider it unnecessary that are supposed to get involved in regular exercise

  • 表语从句
    The most important effect/reason/element to be considered is that____
    The another reason/element effect I must point out is that+表语从句

  • 同位语从句
    The fact/evident that____shows/manifests that______

  • 定语从句:
    灵活只要你的句子中挑1-2个名词就好了
    比如:
    Pursuing some movie stars blindly is nothing but a waste of time for students(who have a lot of academic tasks).

  • 非限制性定语从句
    _______,which gives rise to dreadful/beneficial consequences.
    _______,which leaves us a deep impression.

  • 状语从句

  1. so ..that (The frog is so adorable that everyone is fond of it)
  2. if 引导的虚拟语气写作句式

举例论证

  • 举例认证：领出例子+例子本身——例子总结
    • I can think of no better examples tha the following ones:
    • Among all facts relating to the this topic that I have heard, noticed and experienced , the most impressive one is sb/sth/that + 表从
    • NUmberous examples can demonstrate the power of XXX .A case point is XXX.

第三自然段P3：如何解决（总器具+措施分点（2-3）+展望）

框架:Based on what has been discussed above, aconclusion can be drawn safely that__句子__.On one hand, 措施一.On the other hand, 措施二.The sooner effective measures are taken, the more glorious future we will embrace
　　措施这么展开？ 分主体

  • 政府
    1.formulate relevant laws and regulations
    2.allocate money to…
    3.setup feedback and monitoring system.
  • 媒体(mass media 大众媒体)
    help to strengthen public awareness
  • 个人
    maintain/nurture a rational attitude
    adopt a healthy lifestyle and proper attitudes toward life.
    框架:To my knowledge, xxx, a thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can exert a profound influence for either good or bad on the growth of people__理由/建议__

写作写法

越来越多: a growing number of +n/an increasing ~ of N

  • so,,,that 引导的目的状语从句
  • if引导的虚拟语气(反面论证)
  • as…as 引导的同级比较状语从句(写哲理类的特别使用)
    sth is very important:
    sth is/seems/proves as significant/viatal/essential/crucial/indispensable as air/water/oxygen ,which might perform an function in growth of all creatures
  • 强调句
    It is ,,,,强调部分…that+句子剩余部分

    It that
    It is apparent that
    It looks beyond dispute that
    It has been widely accepted that
    It is universally ackonwledged that
    It keeps my agrument that
    主语从句句型可以写在作文中任何一句话前面用来拉长句子
  • 定语从句

特殊句式

  • 倒装:部分倒装Only+状语，主句部分倒装

一些作文写法

书信作文

  • 第一段：自我介绍+表明意图
    I am a __ who__ . The purpose of my letter, as a matter of fact, seeks to____. The reason why I am writing the letter, to be honest, is in order to.
  • 论述写信的内容
    It, to begin with, seems my argument that___. Then most importantly, ____ . Another element I must point out is that____
  • 结尾
    I look for forward to your reply at your earlist convenience. I wise you every success in you career

漫画类作文

  • 第一段引出漫画+描述漫画+总结漫画
    映出漫画

    • The past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that_____
    • ____ has arouse a long-running controversial debate.
    • There is a growing tendency nowadays that_____
    • There is a growing worldwide awareness of N.

    描述漫画(找三要素:人物，动作（no less than 2），地点)

    • As is vividly/clearly shown in the cartoon,_______
    • s+v1+o,v2（非谓语）+周围环境:Two tourists are sightseeing in the well-docorated boat, discarding their leftover rubbish into the river
    • 地点状语提前(完全倒装)+ 非谓语+ 周围环境:In the well-docorated boat sit two tourists, discarding their leftover rubbish into the river
    • 地点状语提前(完全倒装)+非谓语+with应到的独立主格：In the well-decorated boat sit two tourists, chatting and sightseeing, with rubbish such a platisc floating around the boat
      总结漫画
    • simple as the cartoon is, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as sea.
    • The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the picture
    • The implication is not only informative , but instructive as well.

图表

  • 第一段:引出图标+图标描述公式+总结图标
    引出图表
    • N/主语从句 has provoked a long running controversial debate.
    • There is a growing worldwide/national awareness consciousness of ____.
    • Nowadays , it hits the headlines of the journal/magazing/newspaper that_______ , which has awaken a intense debate uncommon social phenomenon that_____.
    • The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon social phenonmenon that______.
  • 图表描述公式
    • As is (symbolically/clearly/logically) indicated in this chart/According to the chart, we can see that_____从句.
    • This chart(give above) arranges the information of this topic, unfolding that_____从句.
    • 从句公式:the number of 主题+变化+程度+范围(时间范围)
      • 变化:
      • 上升:increase, be on the rise , grow up, rocket up, ascend
      • 下降:decrease, go down, decline, diminish, descend
      • 平衡:keep balance, remain a steady/stable level
      • 万能: experience an upward/downward trend
      • 程度:
      • slightly(slowly); significantly(sharply;dramatically); steadily
      • 范围:
      • from to;时间状语
  • 总结图表:
    • Simple as the chart seems, the implication behind it is as deep as to ocean .
    • The implication is not only informative, but also instructive as well
    • Isolated as the figures seem to be, as a matter of a fact, they are connected to one another closely

写作单词替换

单词

  • individual/private individual/human beings/citizen/people/inhabitant
  • should + v:be supposed to do sth / ought to do sth/be obliged to do sth
  • think : assume/hold the view /have been convinced/ cling to the prospective
  • enable sb to do sth: equip sb with the ability to do sth
  • in our daily life: in our daily routine/ in the general routine of everyday living/in our contemporary society
  • give rise to = lead to 导致

过度词语

  • to began with/ to start with/ first and foremost/ at the very beginning
  • besides/ in addition/ additionally / moreover/ furthermore/
  • At last/ Last but not least
  • 作为连接句子的过度词语: to be concrete/ to be specific/to be honest/

马斯洛需求若干写作短语

  • 自我实现

    • fulfill one’s potential
    • promote social skills and abilities
    • improve one’s competitiveness
    • give sb motivation to do sth
    • accomplish the task perfectly
    • absorb advanced knowledge

  • 情感归属

    • be satisfied with(be content with)
    • keep a positive mental state;
    • show an aspiring attitude towards life
    • establish a correct outlook on life and values

  • 生理/安全 需求

    • intense competition of the labor market
    • hunt for a stable/decent job
    • cover one’s living expenses
    • stay physically and mentally healthy
    • afford one’s tuition fee, installment, rent, utility bills.

  • 社会角度

    • promote the good functioning of our entire society
    • xxx is remarkably beneficial to building a harmonious and civilized society

一些句式收集

  • there is new evidence suggesting that 句子

  • sb have/has been convinced that sth might pose a threat to society, a direct cause of 疾(obesity/depression/cancer) (身心健康语聊)

  • put/exert a burden on sth 施加压力到某事

  • sleeping and eating disorders 睡眠饮食紊乱

  • processed foods and drinks 加工食品

一些句子收集